New Songs, Critique

Hi all. I am just starting to sing, and I need all the comments tips and hints I can get to help me get better. I have improvised this short little song to showcase what I can do on guitar and sing. link is here http://www.reverbnation.com/cr4nk

Thank You All

EDIT:

Hi again. I have recorded four covers, and I would like your opinion on them. It will help me a lot if you can tell me what you liked and disliked about my singing. The music is here http://www.reverbnation.com/cr4nk

Last edited by cr4nk (2011-03-08 14:07:19)